I push forward
But then arch back
Because I'm afraid
Of what I may lack
I found shelter in your safety
Your protection covered me
You were my cocoon
You shielded me
Now I am exposed
Helpless to the world
Abashed for what they may think
Averse to my own worth
I long for your wings
To fly me away
I long for the comfort
In the words you would say
I push forward again
This time I will not yield
I will learn to be strong without you
To carry my own shield

Tisk tisk laney you meant to be working not writing poetry

lol i cant help it! so what do u think?

I think it is nice you are using that for your outlet. You could write rad melodic death metal

lmfao, u know this one band wants me to write for them lol (the snowcapped romance) my friend Brendan Leak is the lead singer / songwriter

Are they metal or emo. bec it would suit melodic death metal. I have an ear for these things(due to me studying the guitar and music trends)

like romantic love songish..

No no no. Your poems are full of hurt and pain and redemption. That to me is a melodic death metal

ok ok, so i can play some instruments , wanna start a death metal band??

With you ofcourse. But you never told me what you can play

Tsar wrote:With you ofcourse. But you never told me what you can play

lol ok so yeah i was in the band in highschool, so i can play wooden flute, trumpet, base drums, snare drums, cylender drums, and a little piano i want to learn how to play piano better

Don't you wanna learn how to play the guitar

i can play sweet dreams on guitar and that is it lmfao - yeah i could do that

Lol playing real guitar takes years(I played every day for three years nearly 4 years to play the way I play today)

Maybe one day I can teach you

ok

You sound disappointed

no not at all, i was just thinking

:Oq:

sorry im strugling with this one poem...

You should try not to push to many poems just now you lose all your creativeness.

You don't want to burn yourself out

lol, i could never loose it lol

Well I will support you and your poems

aw thanks

So umn when will this new poem be out miss laney.

I am just a simple man

Tsar wrote:So umn when will this new poem be out miss laney.

I am just a simple man

not tonight kind sir, not tonight